My Soul ’have bidden me a BYE
I am laying here fright-struck
Each word it said rang upon,
Each thought it shared shivers upon,
Each truth it found struck upon.
I am laying here fright-struck
Each word it said rang upon,
Each thought it shared shivers upon,
Each truth it found struck upon.
“Hi friend”, it called on
“I need no preface,
I was pensive all these days,
It’s scorching summer over here,
In your heart, sometimes,
Chilling winter some other times,
Often it is daunting cloudbursts.
You always cared others
And I felt lonesome.
And now, I do see a warm vale,
Where love and care hugs me tight
And de-rigueur are held so loose,
A Heart which is sworn garland,
Where red carnations blooms for me,
And canaries sing me lullabies…!!
I am going to leave you, friend…….!”
My soul said me and flew to oblivion.
I watched it soaring heights,
I watched and wondered,
‘My soul was never seen much prettier
Than it is now’
I felt it like a reverie,
But now, I too set in search
For a ‘ warmest vale ’ !!!
all are deserted.. where u cud find a warmest vale!
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loosin hopes make ourself deserted…..!
Be green in ua thoutz n den find a vale…!
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a verse with full of soul…………………..
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TANX…!
when itz from Life … verses goes so ..!
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nyce one ,,,,,vale is beneath yor tots n practic
haifa…
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Intense!
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@sourav: Deep from Heart !
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aaaahhhhh
So btfull…lovey dovey…
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Tanx Nikita…Longing for more comments n support . . . !
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Hey Girl,
It's my pleasure to share you 'Stylish Blogger Award'. Please visit to know more!
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powerful.
invite you to join us today,
any poem would work.
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sure…!
It would be a promosing place..I hope .. . !
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Very thought-provoking.
Thanks for sharing
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@AndY: tanX n welcUm to ma space . . . !
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beautiful,
Glad that you joined poets rally.
Cheers.
😉
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Stunning.
Nice thought provoking.
Be blessed.
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@jingle:Its ma pleasre 2 b one amng d rallied !
@Meiro:suport…support…n get thotz provoked . .. !:)
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visiting you with smile,do stop by, http://prathi-says.blogspot.com/
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Wonderful depth, beautifully written
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@prathima: sure I ll b der on ua space soon…! B ready wit a coffee..!:)
@miser:TanX…Some of d deep lines from a deep love…!
do stop by here often..!
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Hello Haifa…
A new follower of your blog 🙂
You write beautifully and I loved your works…
Loved this poem- beautiful, simple and thought provoking…
Best wishes and love,
Hanan Bint Alavi
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Hi Hanan,
Welcome to My space !!!
Pleasures to hear that You loved here….! Keep visiting !
And I will be visiting Your space too!
Keep Going ever !
Best Wishes!
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I'm not a poet,
so duno vat 2 se
but, i enjoyed
dats al i want.
thanks
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